Пользователь Cassie Clare (cassandraclare) ответил на комментарий, оставленный вами к записи в Живом Журнале. Комментарий, на который был получен ответ:

first, I loved it, of course. Team Jace and all)
but now it's just toooooo much of jace. for me only, probably, but still. and this "over-vulnerability" of his, especially somewhere in the middle, with you describing every single impulse... no offends intended, of course, I LOVE TMI, but here it felt like over-sweetened tea. I mean, didn't Clary also feel "upset" about him being her brother? and they are different, and their feelings to each other are different, i get it. But Jace is a boy after all.

Ответ был таким:
FTR, critique is fine. I don't mind it. I agree that the original scene is better — that's why it's the scene in the book — and even if I were to have written the scene in the book from Jace's POV, I wouldn't have written it like this. I think there's a certain unsettling aspect to reading something like this, which gives Jace's feelings in such detail, when they are usually so elided.

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напиться, что ли, от собственного величия?..